Here is the first draft of the script, for our short film. It is currently very rough as was uncertain of what particular characters could and would say in a real life situation similar to this as want the short film to be as realistic as possible. I sent this draft script to my teacher and showed to other members of my class to get feedback that would be able to help me expand and portray the idea more clearer.
Here is the same first draft of the script but with the notes and suggestions that were made along the side. I am going to take all the new ideas and alterations into consideration and try to produce a more detailed and specific script.
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