Group Logline:
"A young boy struggles to come to terms with the death of his farther"
As a group we decided on the logline that Rosie created, we chose this logline as it seemed most appropriate, as we are able to have easy access to the location of which is centred around the school. Also the characters within the short film would be able to be played by our group members and fellow class mates as the main characters are two teenagers one male and one female, meaning we can portray them realistically.GENRE - DRAMA
Beats
1- Pan around Josh's room showing all his awards
2- We see josh sitting on his bed looking through photos
3- Josh meets a gang of boys at school - Feeling UN-supported by his grieving mother. Josh turns to the support of a gang.
4- Josh getting himself into trouble
5- Gang makes Josh prove his worth, by bringing a knife into school and gets caught
6- The school call the police
7- Josh meets his old school friend called Amy
8- Amy tries to discover a solution to help Josh stop being in a gang and convinces him to resolve his issues by visiting his grave.
1- Pan around Josh's room showing all his awards
2- We see josh sitting on his bed looking through photos
3- Josh meets a gang of boys at school - Feeling UN-supported by his grieving mother. Josh turns to the support of a gang.
4- Josh getting himself into trouble
5- Gang makes Josh prove his worth, by bringing a knife into school and gets caught
6- The school call the police
7- Josh meets his old school friend called Amy
8- Amy tries to discover a solution to help Josh stop being in a gang and convinces him to resolve his issues by visiting his grave.

spelling of members and 'of which' to be altered.We decided to use Rosie's logline...as the location is...
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